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May
10

milling crowd


a city full of ppl

ignorant of odr’s presence

….a milling crowd

lots many faces but none familiar

seem all alike

…where exactly s my own blanket

caring,protective n mine,only mine

who shines at d altar…a guidin lite

commoners fear God to abide by him

may b he sent me his own customized version

wen he sent my elder brother

….to d world,to live as n among commoners

2 b my guiding lite at d ย altar n dat 2 forever….

sumtymes he s a teacher,firm n strict

bt snt heย  sooo much fun 2 b wid

for him m d “sweetest girl ever”

wat if he calls me idiot n innocent

i kno i luv him sooo much

……..i also try to act lik him

wen i m in doubt,i kno he s rite

a familiar face in d milling crowd!

………..my elder brother..

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10 Responses to “milling crowd”


  1. 1 piyush
    May 17, 2010 at 4:27 am

    this one’s the best of the lot..all of them are wonderful..gr8 work.

  2. 3 piyush
    May 17, 2010 at 6:19 pm

    it takes two men to make one brother…

  3. 5 anas
    May 17, 2010 at 11:18 pm

    extremely refreshing.! nd a beutiful read..!
    Best wishez to yr bro too..
    ๐Ÿ™‚
    .
    nd frm the elder bro’s pnt of view:
    khudaya mitate chalna kuch qadmo ke nishan mere,
    koi chalta hai unhe wahi maan ker…
    ๐Ÿ™‚

    [wahi: some supreme commandment, oracle]

    • 6 pujapathak
      May 18, 2010 at 10:30 pm

      @anas
      ……thanx a lot 4 d encouragement :)…alwez luk 4wrd 4 ur encouragin lines…..n sum cmplimntry 1s:)

  4. 7 arpit pandey
    May 21, 2010 at 9:27 am

    grt lines yaar..

  5. 9 Rishabh Shukla
    May 23, 2010 at 5:56 pm

    excellent stuff…infact one of ur best…
    the idea n d concept is brought up in a concise and beautiful manner…
    keep it up! ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. 10 puja pathak
    May 25, 2010 at 12:12 am

    thank u ๐Ÿ™‚


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