04
Apr
10

“my faith”


v shud c d garden much btr now,

if v cud get on d hill top,

n here s a path dat leads,

straight to it atleast,

but no,it doesnt do dat,

but v suppose it wil atlast,

but how curiously it TWISTS…..

well den v wil keep tryin,

coz v have “faith”!! 🙂

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8 Responses to ““my faith””


  1. 1 rishabh shukla
    April 4, 2010 at 1:25 pm

    very thoughtful…n although it carries a shade of negativity initially but by the end it throws it off well…
    gr8 work…
    again!! 🙂

  2. 3 anas
    April 4, 2010 at 3:40 pm

    Beautiful,
    kitna saaf -seedha- saral rasta hai dekho,
    na kisi shakh ka saya hai, na kisi deewar ki tek…
    na kisi aankh ki aahat hai, na kisi dil ka sog…
    Kitna saaf -seedha, saral rasta hai dekho…
    🙂

  3. 5 gaurav
    April 4, 2010 at 4:02 pm

    nice poem its shows winners never quit.they keep on trying thats the spirit of life

  4. 7 anas
    April 29, 2010 at 12:13 am

    Hey thanks, actually i felt a parellel btw ’em and yr poem here…
    How that straight path had that mysterious twist…
    Waise its good ‘aid to the faith’ if yu knw what lies at the end of the path…good thot..
    🙂


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