23
Aug
09

crack of dawn


..dis s ma first post in dis blog n “crack of dawn” seemed apt to pen down as t gives a tinge of optimism n even its sole crack of dawn gives positivity[:)]…………

When the sun has set,

lights switched off,
I feel myself casted over

by a spell……
This situation is

a unique feeling,
I feel protected

by judging your presence….
waiting for
the crack of dawn
The star-studded sky

signals me something,
And I,all alone on the grass,

begin talking………
I poured out

all my inner depression,
To share,with whom,

I was really walking!
waiting for
the crack of dawn
God!I have

faith in you,
In you,I have pinned

my trust…………
Whenever I feel

you are hearing,
At once,out

 my sadness bursts………
waiting for
the crack of dawn

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17 Responses to “crack of dawn”


  1. 1 yogang
    August 23, 2009 at 4:37 pm

    poem seems to bring out your inner sadness……your castled emotions have pasteurized the inhibited lonely soul whose heart has now nothing to complaint ……….reminds me of the ancient mariner…….gr8 composition.

  2. 3 Piyush Pathak
    August 23, 2009 at 7:59 pm

    An impressive set-up..quite similar to what evry1 smewhr smetime always go through..and in the bigger picture its inevitability..good!

    P.S.:but why use ‘ma’ instead of my??the rest is kool..hehe..tc!

  3. 5 Rishabh Shukla
    August 25, 2009 at 2:01 am

    ur best blog ever! hehe…ok ok..a wonderfully written poem..quite different from ur previous works..gives an insight to d emotional part f urs…d flow is smooth as ever…but i have seen d best f ur works 🙂

    • 6 pujapathak
      August 25, 2009 at 7:17 am

      yeah yeah i know bout d best work…….thnk thnk u…nothin cn b btr dan gettin gud words for ur first venture[:D]……..cudnt hv been possibl widout u……

  4. 7 Rishabh Shukla
    August 26, 2009 at 10:01 pm

    nice collection of wallpapers 🙂

  5. 8 puja pathak
    August 27, 2009 at 7:05 am

    wat bout d beautiful lyrics?????????????:)

  6. 9 ashraf
    August 27, 2009 at 1:28 pm

    its just like a beautiful painting that depicts the true sense of emotions and aspirations of an innocent mind……………..

  7. 11 gaurav
    August 27, 2009 at 3:46 pm

    This poem is based on hope and gives us to look at positive side of life

  8. 13 chandra choor
    August 29, 2009 at 3:35 am

    damn… seems like a guy in a cancer ward dying of cancer counting his last days looking out of the window before his therapy sessions is trying to be optimistic out of desperation…some suicide note it seems…thats some cynical take on optimism…good work..the idea of a passive romantic optimist individual…well put..

  9. 15 Rishabh Shukla
    August 29, 2009 at 8:17 pm

    d lyrics r cool!!….d comment was on d earlier video 🙂

  10. 16 anuj
    September 23, 2009 at 7:57 pm

    Gud Pooja……Its nice. U hav given me a gud idea to express my experiences ….


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